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Dear Justyn.

Dear Justyn
How are you today?
How is heaven?
What else can I say?

I saw your mom
It scared me to see her smile
Because it seems like not too long
Since she held the body of her child

Where did we go wrong with you
What could we have done better?
To make you know our love was true
Without you signing that suicide letter

I miss you terribly so
But it's an awkward kind of feeling
to let other people know
that your death still leaves me reeling

You have no clue
what you've done to me
But what can I do
You're just gone, see?

I've taken up a sword
against choking chains
And I give you my word
I won't let it happen again

I know I can't stop them all
But I can stop some
Just help me give the call
and I know they will come

Give Jesus a hug
and tell God all my plans
And tell the angels above
That I give my Amen

Take this red rose
and my ring of silver
Tell me what you chose
and let it flow like the river

Love me

Please tell me what you think

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  • Immortal Obscurity Greeters member
    November 6, 2007

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    Awww hun, that was really sad! I really felt for the narrator... it always hurts to lose someone so precious to you... Beautiful write, keep 'em coming!


  • Psyche Of Kandy
    July 2, 2007
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    so sad. but a great poem
    xo
    kandy

  • matthew-
    July 1, 2007
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    this is very sad, but pretty still...