Drifting spatial
Silence surrounding
August simmering closer
Dry waters forcing themselves
Freely feeding hunger
By means of dehydration
Felt forcefully deep down
Within folly profuse
Answering malice harshly
By means of extortion
Seeking stark truth
Elusive
A contest entry
- Art Inspired : Desert Nude #1 by Luna Tique Fringe.
475 points, ended July 3, 2007, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Amazing
This is amazing baby. Well done and congrats on the HM trophy.
Keep writing and I will keep reading.
Love Always
Your Ap Girl
Countrybabe
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Abstract beauty, this is. The imagery is unique
and the alliteration is used sparingly is awesome
"Drifting spatial
Silence surrounding
August simmering closer"....LOve this.
Thanks for wonderful piece of poetry.
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awesome job with the pen hun. loved it and love ya, keep them coming. I loved it the poem was as awesome as always.
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wow, that was great!!!
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Now this quite the excellent piece...goes with the art very well....best wishes in this contest...good luck...smiles, Terry
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gorgeous piece
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Oh Man this may just be one of your best writes yet my Otter-Pop! outstanding, impeccably capturing the feel of this art...
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