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End Of The Rainbow



Journey of mystery
bound by no limits,
as path cross
caressing fibers
of inner beings

Connected by nature's force;
gathering heartbeats,
vivid memories
along the way

cherishing,
forgetting,
regrets of roses
that never bloomed

passing moments to
reflections,
while winds whisper sighs to glimmering stars
of wishes;
hope

love ~

Cobblestone,
gravel,
whims that are traveled;
simple pleasures
leading down a wondrous adventure

Destiny or fate,
is but a colorful rainbow...
with treasures already made





Author notes

Please do not use my name.. thank you
I know it isn't colorful or vivid poetically, but in life, one doesn't need to find that pot of gold to be rich.

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  • poet2angels gold member
    July 11, 2007

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    This is beautiful!
    I love the notes...I so agree with that statement..
    Such wonderful imagery and a perfect ending!

    TY for entering this creative piece!

    Lynda


  • Sonja
    July 8, 2007

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    Very nice dear friend, it was my pleasure to read this poem an to be in the same run with you. Very nice written and great used pictures and adjectives.
    ~Sonja~

  • tara wilson gold member
    July 3, 2007
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    "vivid memories
    along the way

    cherishing,
    forgetting,
    regrets of roses
    that never bloomed"...
    sigh...this is so beautiful...
    "Destiny or fate,
    is but a colorful rainbow...
    with treasures already made"
    So right you are...I had never thought
    about destiny or fate like that before


  • S-Diana
    July 2, 2007

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    I really liked the way you have penned it...All the best in the contest


    • jasminerose
      July 3, 2007

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      Thank you!!

      Hi S-Diana
      Nice to meet you and thank you so very much for such a wonderful compliment on my poem
      I think I shall need the luck... lol as there are already so many beautiful entries..
      Have a great day
      Jasminerose

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