I feel almost blank;
A life that I can see before me
Being that of my own...
But I know I can do it
This life I know can be full of hard work and stress on my mind
But will it pay off?
I’m going through something right now
That I’m not quite sure how to get out of...
I feel almost scared and alone...
That no one understands me anymore like they used to...
I tremble and cry in the dark late into the night
Where no one is awake
With exception of those going through “hard” times like me;
We are like kin
Those souls that go through the same emotionally troublesome feelings;
We can relate...
On the contrary, I haven’t found one to relate just like me...
Again I say I feel alone...
I’m in a trench of voices and dark shadows,
Past kisses, and words full of passion...
I’m lost forever it seems
And I don’t know what to do
But stare into the abyss in my mind
And bleed from my eyes till I die...
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Powerful. The feeling of being Alone is probably the most scary one. Well described and constructed, and excellantly presented. Thanks for sharing
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there's people who would say "i'm going through that right now too" or "everyone feels that way at some point"
it's so silly to say something like... i'm going through a phase where i hate life or something but i intend on making it past this phase... well then you don't really hate life now do you?
that says nothing about your poem though. it was more inspired by the last comment.
i like your poem. -
very great job
omg this is scary because am feeling like you right now i feel this very much nice job very nice job i feel you but just keep your head up we will make it would you like to join my club just want to be heard take a look at it
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