Sweat on the brow mid sultry night,
temperatures on the rise.
Gentle hands so tender and slight,
sexy come hither sighs,
Deep moist kisses and roving hands,
lips locked as tongues dance.
Lay me down upon the white sands,
as love and you enhance.
Kisses on shoulders bare and tan,
naked in the sea breeze.
I will make you feel like a man,
do anything you please.
Upon the water neath moon glow,
sweet whispers on the tide.
Passion makes me begin to flow,
releasing deep inside.
Ecstasy, each moment we seize,
leave me begging for more,
Once more sensations start to please,
feeling good as before.
In a list
A contest entry
- Love Passionate Erotic Poems by rosepoet.
300 points, ended July 26, 2007, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This is a beautiful poem Sandy. I really like your words and descriptions. It makes me want to beg for more. Just a little correction on spelling, it's "ecstasy" not "Ecstacy." Your friend Jeff.
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Lovrely Comment!!!
Good Morning Jeff, Your comment was very lovely my dear friend. Always a pleasure to have you read my poetry. You take care and have a wonderful day. Sandy
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A great rhyming poem.
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Nice Comment
Thank you Linda for the nice comment. I appreciate you stopping by and reading. Take care, Sandy
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Very Tender with passion
Kisses on shoulders bare and tan,
lie naked in the breeze.
I will make you feel like a man,
do anything you please.
Upon the water neath moon glow,
sweet whispers on the tide.
Passion makes me begin to flow,
releasing deep inside.
The surrender of heart and soul to passionate embrace shared by two souls is beautifully woven Sandy.
Blissful
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Wonderful Comment
Good Morning, Thank you for the wonderful comment. So glad you liked it. Hope you have a wonderful day. Take care my friend. Sandy
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Passionate.
I loved loved loved all the feeling in this poem. The rhyme was great, the structure obvious, adding a beautiful touch. It was great and the beginning, and it got better and better. Great job with this, and I'm glad you featured it - it's a must-read!
Well done, and keep writing!
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Lovely Comment!!
Good Morning, I would like to say thank you for stopping by and reading my poem. I do appreciate your lovely comment. You have a wonderful day. Sandy
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Very tender poem, with a very good visual, lots of elements covering almost all the senses. Lovely work~
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Great Comment!!!!!
Hello, Thank you for stopping by my and reading my poem. Your lovely comment is most appreciated. You take care. Sandy
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Such a sexy lady you are. I alwasys enjoy your work. I lked your rhyme whih you do well. I found very little to be criticle about. Good work
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Lovely Comment!!!
Good mprning oldpoet. Ah, Thank you for this lovely comment. Always so nice to hear from you. Hope you have a wonderful day too. You take care. Sandy
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a brilliant beginning but you didnt keep the same intensity troughout the whole poem. some parts didnt really flow must notisable in the fourth stanza. i really like the poem though. you didnt push it too far and you clearly showed that it was from the manifestation of love.
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Good Morning!
Thank you so much for the lovely comment and the advice. I appreciate both. I did change it a little. When writing from my heart I pay little attention to the meter or flow.
. Thank you for stopping by and reading. You take care, Sandy
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