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Speaking of the Memory you’ve left behind “In my blood-shot eyes"

Can’t take apart how I feel about you
Analyze all you want
I still can’t figure out why
I still cry over you at night

Things aren’t the same anymore
Sometimes it gets so bad
That I almost pick up the phone
Break open the feelings I’ve tried to hide
The Lesson has yet to be learned

Chorus:
Rip open this worried mind
Over think the problems that’s consumed me in time
“Be Strong” is just a phrase
Watching the tears disappear within the pillow case

Tear apart your constant lies
Reveal a barely beating heart that’s
Buried itself alive 
  I know it’s strange
It’s just another way of saying “How am I suppose to love you?”
I’m supposed to love you?

I’m trying to control my fate
Discovery is too late to
Figure out what it is that you really want
“Split ends and blood-shot eyes”
Left over from this mess
That you called “happiness”

(and) Things aren’t the same anymore
Sometimes it gets so bad
That I almost pick up the phone…

Chorus:
Rip open this worried mind
Over think the problems that’s consumed me in time
“Be Strong” is just a phrase
Watching the tears disappear within the pillow case

Tear apart your constant lies
Reveal a barely beating heart that’s
Buried itself alive 
  I know it’s strange
It’s just another way of saying “How am I suppose to love you?”
I’m supposed to love you?

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  • LifeEndsNow
    September 24
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    Yay


  • Darkimagination
    June 30, 2007

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    Excellent

    Really enjoyed reading this piece. Your writing creates strong vivid visuals, and stirs the heart with it content. Nice job!


    • worldswonder88
      June 30, 2007
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      Thank you so much for your input. It's defently nice to hear that you enjoyed it. If you ever have any pointers about writing I'd love to hear them.
      Again thanks so much.
      <3 Holly