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Right In Front Of Me

Who would have thought we would end up this way.
Friends from the start but that changed day by day.

Which one of us would admit our feelings first?
Month after month, one of us had to burst.

The moment had finally come, we knew it was right.
We shared our first real kiss that night.

From there we started to grow.
Day after day our endless love started to show.

Neither of us had ever come close to feeling this way.
God made us wait for each other so we could be together today.

It took our friendship for me to clearly see.
That what I was looking for was always right in front of me.



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  • storiesuntold gold member
    October 15, 2007
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    Beautiful

    Such love to form through friendship is a lifer indeed


  • angeloffire69
    September 9, 2007
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    haha i really like this. it has true emotion and it tells a story that i think many of us begin to feel but some of us are afraid to act out on it because it might change the relationship you may already have...i def applaud you!!!


  • kennethlaney
    September 7, 2007
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    Very Good Poem

    I have a few similar on a older version, but it was agood poem and a good thought! Keep on writing.
    "BOO"
    try a little to balance out your lines thou.