Spicy silver scented shower spray surrepticiously soothes suffering soul.
Sensitivity’s slippery soap sensation store suddenly sends successive subtle subsurface sonar signals strangely satiating serendipity’s sun.
Had we not met, had I through disappointment's hole
not slipped before, would joyful journey now begun
have occured elastoplasting splintered parts made whole
validating vibrations verifying unexpected union.
Dreams drive Destiny’s dance despite dire danger, difficulty, distress.
Desire dismisses disillusion, deftly derides delusion; Destiny dismantles discord. Self-fulfilling fun
flows fluidly through Time's wave bands’ ripple role pursuing harmonious horizon
untouched, unsmutched, unattainted, as inner reach attains role reversal, releases control … Story spun.
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Oops indeed.
Looks like your poem was removed from the contest.
I'm really sorry! It might just be because of AP's faulty line-counting (which really should be fixed...), but I feel kinda guilty that I was accusing you of that earlier when it turned out not to be true. Ugh.
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well, i really like it.its kinda hard to understand though. then again mabey it's supposed to be, only you know. other than that i reallylike it
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Ah...
It's good, I like it, although it's a bit confusing... I guess that it's supposed to be. Lots of interesting word choices, bit of a tongue-twister element to it....
However, Samplette required all entries to be no more than 10 lines, and yours is almost twice that. Bit of a problem, don't you think?
Keep up the good work, though!
~ Goldmare
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