© B. B., 6-30-07
Down, so down, my words surround;
They’re like my heart that falls apart;
I’m seen through them; it should be You,
In them see sin, but I want true;
So I come and hide inside;
The Son’s the One; my sole Abide;
His love is strength to embolden me;
His truth’s my breath, to help me breathe;
You made me twice, both out of love;
You paid the price, I’m borne above;
And then I see the love remaining;
Still with me and still claiming
He made my person as His own blessing;
This one I’m cursing, He’s confessing;
“See the one My hand has made;
A work begun and unrestrained;
What’s in you is of My will;
My joy’s so true, to make you still;
“So be that joy in My sight;
With words as toys, write what’s right;
Abide in Me, and I in you;
This muse so free, with grace so true;
“Take the pen, as My sword;
Be My amen; I’m the Lord;
Let what you write agree with Me;
Fight the good fight in grace and mercy;
Be the one that I have made;
Good work begun and unrestrained;
Who you are is My desire;
So be My star and holy fire;
“By your will, I am your choice;
You’re choosing still, and I rejoice;
Who you are while you roam;
Is My art, and My poem.
“Enjoy this season, in its time;
This, My reason, and My rhyme;
My plan for you, with peace and hope;
Seek My will true; for it, grope;
You are My work, made in Me;
Do not shirk; look up and see”
Author notes
“For we are His workmanship, created in Christ Jesus for good works, which God prepared beforehand that we should walk in them.”—Ephesians 2:10
The Greek word for “workmanship” is “poiema”, where we get the word “poem.”
I read your contest is about poetry, with options for spirituality. How about both in one?
How about His own being His masterpiece, meant to reflect His way and potential. I believe that's why Paul used the Greek noted above in the cited Bible verse.
Think about it.
A contest entry
- Eternal Newness - a quote inspired poetry contest by thelordreigns.
450 points, ended July 6, 2007, 8 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Very beautiful thoughts, an amazing concept, a tribute to the glory of His Name, as He is the only one who Creates. Thank you for this inspiration and bit of wisdom to meditate upon.
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Concept, huh?...
...meaning idea, thought.
So if I thought of it, maybe the Lord thought of it first.
Your comment validates what the Lord seems to be saying in this. Of course, it must be supported by scripture, which inspired this.
Thanks, Star Shine...
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Christ.....as if its speaking to me....glory be to Christ..stunned...
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By Faith...
...believe the Lord has spoken to you.
I'm blessed knowing you were refreshed by this. May this begin a new chapter for you-a kind of resurrection, to fulfilling that part of His plan for you that has yet to happen.
AMEN?!
God bless, sis...
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I find it ironic
as your last stanza could be about me
especially with initials B.B.
My life interrupted; begun again
With the Blessed St. Therese as my best friend
I would not presume to speak for the Lord
unless I be smote by His mighty sword
All I could wish is be granted the grace
for a fleeting glimpse of His lovely face.
To make God laugh and clap His mighty hands
Just get on your knees and tell Him your plans.
Bob 42 Burns
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I find it ironic
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wow Moof, your poem is breathtaking. Praise the Lord.
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Thanks...
I think the most important part of this is not how I wrote but what the Lord is saying to any of us. It's just using me as an example.
Is where we are at the time, with what we're doing for Him His poem?
I believe so...
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This was a great piece Congrats on the Gold. A very humbling read that puts light to a lot of thing's
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Wow -- you can sure put a light on the truth -- this is just wonderful
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Thanks. And thanks for stopping by.
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beautiful write....
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To be His poem is what every poet and poetess should strive for...
Nice one, Big Brother!
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I Believe...
...that the verse cited promises us that we are all His work of art; those that have trusted in Him. If we abide in Him, that truth is realized.
Thanks, pretty poem o' Jesus!
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Absolutely beautiful. This is medicine for a hurting soul. You have an amazing talent and I can see the light of God in your work. I really needed to read this right now. Thanks so much for sharing. God Bless, amy
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Here's the most comforting part:
It's true!
I hope you also read my comment just below the poem. You will see my inspiration there. If not from truth, then I've wasted the time the Lord has given.
God bless and be encouraged!
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this is a very humbling read. the spirituality in this exudes love and warmth throughout. i love this and i think every person on this site should read this! thank you so much for sharing this. i just read joannes comment and i couldn't say it any better. keep writing! God bless you always
Congrats on the gold!
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Many congrats on the gold, my friend!
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Thanks...
I didn't know Jane Seymour was a member of AP! Wow!
Did anyone tell you that you look like her?
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Powerful Prophetic Poetry
This is an incredible poem - both in form and in message. Every Christian poet should read this and hear from our Lord.
He entreats us to "take the pen, as (his) sword" and to be "(His) star and holy fire." We are "(His) art, and (His) poem."
Wow - what a message for each and everyone of us- saved or not saved.
This is skillfully written - great rhyme, rhythm, imagery, and emotion.
I am totally honored to have this piece as an entry in my contest and I thank you sincerely for penning this poem. You are faithful servant of the Lord Most High and a vessel to bring Him honor and praise.
God bless you always - joanne
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Your Comment...
...is a humbling blessing. The privilege is mine to be a part of the contest. Thanks and God bless!
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Oh this is an amazing write. I love it!!! "His Poem" What a lovely title to go with a loving piece of poetry. I wish you the best in the contest.
Sa
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Very unique.
This is very unique and it has a lot of spiritual depth reminding us of old truths. Yet it is told in a new way.
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Your Comment...
...made me think of the following verse:
"Then He said to them, 'Therefore every scribe instructed concerning the kingdom of heaven is like a householder who brings out of his treasure things new and old.'”--Matthew 13:52
If that is so, then your comment is especially encouraging to me, for such things are of the Lord.
God bless, and thanks...
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