You
unfold me;
- like gravity -
Then,
we embellish
original shapes.
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Very beautiful, sometimes you don't need to get bogged down with alot of words to get your point across. Very well done
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WOW!
With only a few words you have given me an image I better not describe... lol. VERY WELL DONE Leander.
Yes, I am back... I hope to read more of your work soon. Your friend, Anna
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Very nicely written, and there's nothing wrong with pink spandex. I think?
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This brought a nice settled imagery to me each word as a poem You can ever read this backward and it will still be read the same Very articulart How love could just bring something
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Perfeito!
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muchos gracias
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I must admit I have an unusual weakness for such snippets, for I am a fan of the wise use of words which you appear to master very well. I like it that you express such powerful love without using a single cliche.
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thank you very much
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I love this. Leander, this piece truly reflects a glow in life. Thank you very much for your presence - I understand it and value it as well. Anthony.
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this si beautiful..kinda hts you low in the stomache and reminds me of my first love.
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Love the "new shapes" this poem made me see...beautiful~
~ Nicolette
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OMG! This is awesome! Such a sensual and indepth sense painted here. Bravo!
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you can do it, go for it. ten minutes from now!
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I'm not sure if I was inside the minutes - lol
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