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forgetfully late

This Morning I woke up late
My breakfast I ate
I went to the calender by fate
And forgot I had a date
Perhaps he'll understand and wait
Or I will cry four hours straight

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I chose to try Monorhyme

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  • grannyeri gold member
    July 9, 2007

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    Liked the end rhyme being all the same in these five lines - works well here. Monorhyme is not often used, but you have used it effectively in this poem. Way to go,


    • Beverlynohime
      July 10, 2007
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      aww thanks! Yeah I was trying somethin' alittle different for me. I do rhyming poems a lot but not monorhyme...^_^ it was actually pretty fun to make haha.