inner life
of poet
joy release
relief
power
good fate
A contest entry
- Simplicity by Flossy.
600 points, ended July 1, 2007, 13 entries
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650 points, ended July 3, 2007, 38 entries
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450 points, ended July 7, 2007, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - ANYTHING SHORT by Blooming Poet.
400 points, ended March 7, 2008, 105 entries
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390 points, ended March 18, 2008, 8 entries
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450 points, ended March 30, 2008, 84 entries
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Please tell me what you think
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I can clearly see the simplicity of this write but somehow I can't see the feelness of the abstract. Keep penning
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Deeply expressive... x
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So few words, so much meaning. I love it in everyway. very poetic and very good use of words, or lack of them. LOL
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lol this realy cool
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Good write
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okay
I like that it is short, but there is nothing interesting that you said. When I attempt short poems or things like that I like a really suprising twist so that people continue to think about the poem after they read it. As much or more intriguing than a longer poem. Good write though.
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I love little tiny poems like this, some of the time they are the most pleasing of poems to read. ONly because they can get right to the point to let someone know what they need to know. Good job and keep up the good writing. I loved this poem.
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Liked these brief lines that say so much. Simiplistic indeed. Yet all is said that needs to be. Enjoyed the read,
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Very nice piece, unique form and flow. Thanks for the great entry. Hugs, Bunny
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i've never seen poetry like that on this site before what do you call that?
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Is this a specific genra of poetry or is it just your style? It is very powerful because of the few words you used. Thanks for entering my contest.
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i may have accidently pressed on it, but before I knew it. I had read it, twice. And I can say that this is not my style that I usually read at all. So- few words. I never like that, so my advice. Is that those can be frist lines for stanzas. Your choice or not to accept that challenge/advice.
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very good
although just a few words
i snese the process from thought to pen to paper
or actually, the completion of a story, poem, book, etc
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intresting
its well diffrent and intresting... ive never read one like this...which makes in unique i like it short n wise keep up the good work
~*Love and Peace*~
~Aiko Akemi~
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Oh. This is an interesting poem that you have going on in here. I like it how it's short with just a few words but I still have a pretty good idea of what is going on in it. I think you did a good job on this.
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poet's life
is to write with words whispered in a muse.
Lovely wisdom words..
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An interesting piece, I like the style of it. I like the creativity of this. Very clever. Thanks for sharing
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Very abstract, which is something I love in poetry. Why write if you can't have fun with the style and emotion? I think this embodies some of what writing poetry is all about...congrats!
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