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Tribute

Almost every time I listen to the radio
Very often they play my favorite song
Relatively new, it gets me
In the mood to dance, which is a
Little difficult because of the seat beat in the car

Later on, I can't get the song out of my head
A ring is left in my ear from the
Volume of that electric guitar solo
I look up the lyrics on Yahoo
Giving up most of my computer time learning the song
Now people say I can do a pretty good imitation
Every time, that woman's voice sing in the back of my head.

Author notes

I just found this randomly and decided to enter. Avril Lavigne is one of my favorite artists, so here it is.

I know, the rhythm is kind of irregular, and it's a prose, but it was all I could think of immediately.

(Did you know she's Canadian? Just a random fact.)

("Avril" is also French for the month of April.)

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  • My Darkness
    July 8, 2007

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    this is a great tribute, you are missing grammar/punctuation, one of my few rules, but i still admire your write... very well done, thanks for entering and good luck to you!


  • halleluja
    June 30, 2007
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    lol awesome way to put having a song stuck in your head! I enjoyed it!
    love and peace
    halleluja