Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

Painted Treat

pastel sunset hues
painting a parfait for dusk
luscious treat day’s end

A contest entry

Please tell me what you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • NoWayJo
    July 17, 2007

    Edit | Reply
    "Parfait" is the perfect word to describe the sunset scene of your haiku. Such a pretty haiku as to actually envision this scene.

    Thank you for this lovely entry to the contest, Lora!

    Jo


  • soulfultia gold member
    July 7, 2007

    Edit | Reply
    Hey...this made me hungry! JK This was some nice imagery NoWayJo will love it creative and fun ~tia

    • Lora
      July 14, 2007
      Edit | Reply
      Thanks so much for the comments and applause. I had fun thinking of this one. Blessings, Lora