pastel sunset hues
painting a parfait for dusk
luscious treat day’s end
A contest entry
- The Paint-A-Haiku Contest by NoWayJo.
600 points, ended July 18, 2007, 44 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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"Parfait" is the perfect word to describe the sunset scene of your haiku. Such a pretty haiku as to actually envision this scene.
Thank you for this lovely entry to the contest, Lora!
Jo

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Hey...this made me hungry! JK
This was some nice imagery NoWayJo will love it
creative and fun
~tia


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Thanks so much for the comments and applause. I had fun thinking of this one. Blessings, Lora
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