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Overwhelmed?

All mountains are climbed

one step at a time






 

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Image: Mt Everest

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  • Kevin Moderators member
    August 6

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    very true and with a fun picture I def. get overwhelmed often in life... so many details to see and deal with. Take a deep breath and count to ten, kevin!

  • Simple but true is this poem by you.

    Congrats on the Gold trophy.


  • Ann45 gold member
    February 19
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    Can See what you mean, but not ALL Mountains can be climbed
    Hugs
    Ann


    • Maatkara gold member
      February 19
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      Thank you! That's not necessarily true though, depending on one's definition of 'climbed' (overcome), literal and metaphorical — faith can move them too All comes down to attitude, perception and perseverance


  • Lady Altheia gold member
    November 24, 2008

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    100th Hoodwink

    That is one BIG mountain. I am not much of a mountain climber. I prefer to view it safely on the ground. Congrats on the golden trophy.


  • Polaja Greeters member
    November 23, 2008

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    100th Hood-Wink!

    This is a beautiful short I really like the aha moment at the end - this is wonderfully inspiring! Beautiful take on the prompt and very deserving of gold

    Keep writing

    Polly


  • stylization
    June 3, 2008
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    oh beautiful. not a mountain climber but i love this simple poem.


  • AnnD Moderators member
    January 27, 2008

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    ooh such true words. So much is said in so few words here.
    Anything can be acheived a little at a time, that's all it takes.

    Ann


  • duana
    December 21, 2007
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    The Power Of Truth - Well Said

    Now this is a poem to print, hang on your wall, and memorize because it is the truth and it will inspire anyone who reads this on a daily moment by moment basis- one simple sentence but even bigger and stronger than the biggest, deepest volumnes of depression or doubt a person can write. Thanks for the wonderful inspiration.

  • Gayline
    July 26, 2007

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    Wonderful

    There is so much wisdom in this poem. Well written. By the way I love your page . So much wisdom goodness if I'm not careful I might end up happy.


  • Cemetery Rose
    June 30, 2007
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    Nicely done! Poetic and profound, congrats on the gold, you deserved it!


  • suseann
    June 30, 2007
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    Tee Hee! Witty profound advice.You've summited the peek of wisdom in this.


    • Terry-too silver member
      June 30, 2007
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      And we see the peak of it as well! Clever poem and comment too.


  • Kari gold member
    June 30, 2007
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    Very inspirational, and the best of luck in the contest!


  • MargaretG
    June 30, 2007

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    Very true! this is a great antidote. Best of luck in the contest!

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