In hope I watched, dawn opened her hand
pale blue touched by rosined fingers;
across golden hues to blushing skies,
where shimmering water touched land.
The glorious place on which we stand
where scent of honeysuckle lingers
doves softly render their mourning cries
sunrise weaves celestial strand;
nothing more to want, none to demand,
a picture complete. Catching dewy stringers
born light to dark in tearless good byes
‘neath orange glows splendidly spanned.
You were there too, asleep on the sand
wakening kiss from winged singers
lilting a morning smile to your eyes;
to hold my heart, in sweet remand.
In hope I watched, dawn opened her hand
pale blue touched by rosined fingers;
across golden hues to blushing skies,
where shimmering water touched land.
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Done in La' Tuin form.
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A contest entry
- No prompt. For god's sake just WRITE..... by champrins.
370 points, ended July 6, 2007, 26 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Not familiar with this form, but reads beautifully in the subtle, echoing rhyme. intriguing.
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awesome
i don't know about this form but i know beautiful imagery. this was fantastic. thank you for sharing this with me. viyanna rosemarie
ps--congratulations on the bronze. well done!!!
. Rewarded 4
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such a gentle flow to
this... such serene imagery... this is a wonderful piece and a pleasure to read!
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It's beautiful....
Pure poetry
Gentle and with a dream like quality
Makes me wish I was there*
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Such an exquisite penning, Poet. Good luck in the contest. 
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Gorgeous...
As always, so beautiful and perfect...
sigh~
Lynda
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What a beautiful La'Tuin this is, filled with such imagery and expression. It's good to see my form being used, especially when it's done as well as this Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest. Laura x
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