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The Santa From Hell

I laugh and snicker while I grind my teeth.
The match is lighted.
I toss it and watch the gasoline ignite the Christmas tree.
The fire reflects in my blazing eyes.
I snicker.

The presents slowly burn to ash.
The decoration crack and melt.
I smell the burning tree with a pleasant glow.
I smell the burning tree with a pleasant smile.
I watch.

As it burns I watch the glass angel on the Christmas tree’s roof.
It is turning red from the heat.
It is turning red from my hate.
I laugh as I film the tree with my video recorder.
I laugh as I watch the existence I knew burn to ash.
I laugh as I watch the pain drain from me.
I laugh.

I place the camera down.
Taking the gasoline, I anoint myself with it.
You can see my smile a mile away.
I pull out the match box and laugh.
With one stroke I start to vanish into the air.
I pull out a cigarette and light it from my blazing body.
My last little treat.
I start to dance as I disappear.
As I become what I have wanted all along.
Into nothingness.
I grin.

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  • Sinnastarr silver member
    September 19, 2007

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    this is a very interesting piece..I thought the idea was pretty unique..and you portrayed your thoughts on it quite well.
    Keep up the good writing.


  • NyteShade
    September 15, 2007
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    Another out look on christmas lol. Reminds me of something the grinch would do. nicely done.


  • TwiztidMaggot
    September 14, 2007

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    I really dohn't know how to respond to this poem... um... lol. but yeah, you did do a good job... very interesting... keep it up!

    crimson


  • LucyLightning
    August 4, 2007
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    beautiful, dahling.
    =]]]
    i absolutely loverrred this.
    great great great job.


  • badddgirl
    July 23, 2007
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    Wild!!!

    Yea thats about all I can say right this second,
    Wild!
    Oh my goodness.


  • ilovebigfoot
    July 1, 2007
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    Gosh why did you have to go and ruin christmas like this...loser lol j/k
    I really like this poem


  • Anfractuous
    June 30, 2007
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    Wow...this is....soo deranged. Hah! Awesome. I like it. Good luck for the contest.

  • kshleo53
    June 30, 2007
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    wow

    goodjob! ya nailed the contest! lol this was really strange but good! awesome write

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