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Better To Have One In Tears

Could you tell me?
Whisper it slowly.
And I hope it won't Hurt me.
Who did you miss more?

Could you show me?
Who you're in love with.
Oh please don't leave,
Don't walk out that door.

Could you let me,
Read to myself your heart?
See who the pages bleed for.
Will I want to tear them apart?

Because I fear,
And I know that she fears.
Its better to have one in tears
Then both with aching hearts.

Could you tell me?
Whisper it slowly.
And I hope it won't Hurt me.
Who did you miss more?

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  • SpecialGurl89
    July 27, 2007

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    This is a great write. I Love it. It's filled with insecurity and emotions. I know how this goes. Keeps upu the great writes, and good luck in this contest.
    -Trena