The Truth to tell is the truth to seek,
A lost and lonely heart that beats,
A cold division, eventful tears,
Solid Whispers poisons ears.
Stagnant dreams, trapped inside,
And inspirations scattered wide.
A break within brings no avail,
While seeds of doubt rise up and wail.
A closed off mind that seeks to keep,
But all it brings are tears to weep.
While all around misfortune falls,
Within these tainted, tattered walls.
You can't fortell an unknown truth
While burdened by this heart's fell youth
All that happens are the wings will shatter
And innocence, away will scatter
In hidden words of hate and lies
And poison for these wretched eyes
Broken promises and one damned child
By fell carvings now defiled
In the end you’ll see but a dream
That tears your soul apart from the seams
And shreds you till you plummet under
Your spirit, broken, torn asunder
Greeted by Marionette and master
The dance spins now to Chaos faster
These threads the puppet tightly weaves
Start to tighten as we deceive
Threads of your fate, soon we will sever
To fall within the twisting nether
As Chaos reigns in mind and soul
And hollow thoughts now take control
Yet in the end, more hearts arise,
To cover blackened, burning skies
The rules are set and been applied
And you now, puppet, must abide.
Author notes
Collabed this with Alan, ^.^ we bounce off each other great ne?
Please tell me what you think
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Good write
Very good write here and the ups and downs of life seems to ballance out unless one dwells on the past being blind to the future before them
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n_n thank you for the comment
and I agree, we should look forewords not back
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I guess this is a good one too lol and i love the flow and the trick of words thats been played ova here. The nice explanation thru the poetry is a great idea and i really appreciate this piece of work, u haev done a great job!!
these lines really feel great and i find them hillarious!
Threads of your fate, soon we will sever
To fall within the twisting nether
As Chaos reigns in mind and soul
And hollow thoughts now take control
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Heh, thanks for the comment n_n
I just realised I wrote an Oxymoron hee, i have to stop doing that.
Glad you liked it. : D
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nice, i enjoyed it, i loved the way this flows.
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n_n thank you
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I've seen the first staza before.
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Yeh, i used it in another poem before I cleared out my account. But it didn't work. Where as this does ^.^
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Okay then.
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