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Silent Symphony

Aggression

or agreement;

Flesh slips over flesh

and hands play the melodies

of silenced angels

with controlled

madness.

 

 

 

Possession

or persistence;

Passion turns the silk

of the twisting sheets into

liquid fire, only to hush

their mangled moans

coating them in

serenity.

 

 

 

Defiant

desire yelps

fitful pleas to be filled

with satisfaction; whilst meek

crystal beads of sweat turn to

ice upon her lashes’ tips:

clinging - clawing

to meet on the edge of his lips.

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  • Florida Sunshine
    August 16, 2008

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    You capture the readers attention right from the start. ~ with the added twist from the title. I always love when someone is able to take my mind and spin it like a record.

    I've had this happen to me 'once' in my life. ~ Better to loved and lost then never to loved at all. ~ You have an incredible use of words ~ strong and powerful, yet gentle and soothing.

    As far as 'adult' content & erotica this is by far the best I've read in a long time. You really make me feel it. ~ The imagery & metaphors are over the top... and I clearly see the connection.

    Thanks so much for entering the contest ~ I do appreciate you allowing me to read and review your work.

    Best of luck to you,
    Florida Sunshine


    • luckynsincere
      August 18, 2008
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      Thanks so much for your truly inspirational comment! It has moved me

      Much love,
      Mel


  • Tangled Angle
    June 30, 2007

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    Well that guy is very lucky! lol
    "liquid fire" Loved that image, oxymoron- ish too!
    Excellent job & best of luck in the contest.


  • Master Ktulu silver member
    June 30, 2007

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    This is a wonderfully romantic and most beautifully written write. This is a great read and I thank you for entering this in my contest.

    **Master Ktulu**