Where should I fall down, when everything fails?
Who do I turn to, and why do I bleed?
Weren't you the one, who said we would prevail?
Now you've destroyed me, fulfilling your greed.
The last time you left me, you tore out my heart.
A promise to maintain, I trusted you so,
Through sickness and health, while close and apart,
From before the wedding, I though you would know.
But they're more important, they've loved you fore'er.
And now you have lost me, I'll never be back,
For you have created a monster, beware.
I don't know what love is, my heart has turned black.
So this I implore you, forget about me,
A life without borders is living life free.
Author notes
The next step of life... I think I'm going to link these latest bunch all together.
In a list
How hard is this?
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Hoodwinked
Whewhoo, This is very good, I enjoyed the emotion, bottled and shaken and spilt, lost and gone forever.
Stay free.Write on.
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Hood-Winked!
This is an awesome poem... I like the tone that you have created, and the rhyme and flow are wonderfully done... the only thing that I picked up was that I think you have 'though' instead of 'thought' in the last line of the second stanza... but beautifully done
Keep writing
Polly
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Lol I guess I should fix that huh. Oh well, you know what i meant. And I'm so lack of motivation, I can't even edit it:S
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hott
this was deep when you get a chance read a few of my poems and comment me please i love you !!
AV7XCHICK669
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WOW
left me speechless you are an incredible writer indeed
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Thank you. I am honoured!
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very intense !!!
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