When you entered my life,
my world was in shade.
Shadows around me conspired.
Darkness and sadness
were all that I saw.
Then a Rose gave me all I desired
Now when you leave me
the greyness returns.
I need my Red Rose always near.
Scatter your petals around me.
Never leave me again,
I pray that you won`t disappear.
A contest entry
- Kiss from a Rose by Twilight4Eternity.
450 points, ended July 4, 2007, 12 entries
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Ahhhhhhhhh that is so beautiful. Wonderful write. Good luck in this contest you had a wonderful write. I hope you win this contest. Best of luck!
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Dear Dixie
Beautifully drawn with eloquent word styling. If the much used comment on "You should have made it longer" has become cliche', then make the most of it. It should have been, it is that good!
Good luck in the contest, Dixie!
John
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Very lovely. I like the rhyme scheme, of course I always like rhyme. Nicely done and thanks for entering.
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I want to wish you Loads of Good Luck in the contest. xxx
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A Beautiful Poem
Your words brought a picture of beauty tinged with sadness. An excellent poem xx
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