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Chances

Baby, take a chance on me
Take a chance to feel my embrace
A chance to feel my love
On the wings of a dove
We can fly over the mountains
Over the sea
Where ever we may be
Feeling the touch of love
Flowing down on me
All I can do is sit and wait
For you to respond
To my plea
My plea for love
You can mend my broken wings
Help me fly again
Baby, take a chance on me

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  • Lauren Noir
    August 14, 2007
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    This is sweet and pretty
    It really is loyal and a nice expression
    I love it


  • MagazinesFall
    July 10, 2007
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    BRAVO

    Such a beautiful and powerful poem.
    You can feel the emotion pouring out of it!
    Great Job@


  • forget my memories
    July 3, 2007

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    wow i lovve this its one of my favorites of yours its not all sad and deppresing. I like it amazing job geoff!!

    sam


  • juliex-exotic shine
    June 30, 2007

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    geoff I decided to come visit your page and I'm glad I did cuzz I loveeeee this poem :] It's so cute. I hope whoever it's about does take a chance on you.
    [take.care]
    x.