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A broken rendition

I wish that you could see
how sad you're making me
as we walk underneath this here tree

but heaven only knows
that this lone human soul
could never leave you stranded on your own

so here's my one long dream
my broken form of peace
i'm alone, but my heart still can fly

no more dreams torn to shreads
and you would've never cried
and time would make all right
yeah
friends would never blink an eye
and you would not have walked
and we would be loved

as we would walk along
they all look down and scoff
but you would never let your warm embrance leave

but they all soon had guessed
that the time would surely test
and we would end up wandrin cold, alone


no more dreams torn to shreads
and you would've never cried
and time would make all right

friends would never blink an eye
and you would not have walked
and we would be loved

so here's my one long dream
my broken form of peace
i'm alone, but my heart still can fly

lol, and interesting remake of "my grown up christmas list!"

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  • DreamerOfTheStars
    August 13, 2008

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    awww it was interesting but I liked it and it was really sweet and cute darling... keep up the good work!!!
    Love always~Steph