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crystal pearls

Crystal Pearls drop from your eyes,
my heart plummets deeper.

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10 words for-tears

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  • DancingRed
    July 3, 2007

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    Beautifully moving. You've made lovely links between tears and the feeling it gives to others.
    Well expressed, & thanks for entering.
    DancingRed.


  • Kari gold member
    June 29, 2007
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    Wow, very well done. Thanks for following the rules and I wish u the best of luck in the contest!