It’s just a game she kept telling me
I didn’t believe her, I couldn’t,
She touched me every way I desired,
Reached to the very bottom of my soul and tickled it,
I tried to play her game without falling,
But she fucked like a goddess
Smiled with wicked delight at my presence,
Who couldn’t love such a malicious creature?
Then with honey dripped words she said
‘I love it when you call me baby.’
Like a bird struck dead in mid-flight I fell,
I was reminded of her game,
After mind-blowing, toe-curling,
Oh-my-god-I’d-sell-my-soul-to-the-devil-to-do-that-again,
Sex.
She served my words on a cold platter of revenge
Lixiviating with achingly-sweet poison
She let them fall from her fatally full lips,
‘I love it when you call me baby.’
Author notes
SlyCC
A contest entry
- Sarcasm by Edna Sweetlove.
850 points, ended July 6, 2007, 19 entries
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Comments
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How interesting of a poem. Great write
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Oh my god! This poem is like a good milkshake - tastes good, smells good, tempting in all possible ways. You know it's not good for you, but you want more and more and more... I have to say, it is one of the best poems I read on this website so far.
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I removed this piece because I specifically put no erotica in this contest. please read the rules next time
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Oh Wow...I love the sincerity in your poem...thanks for entering my contest much love, Raneika
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This is amazing, the poem is burning with passion, and you can see two people playing these little games with each other while you read it. I enjoyed this very much thanks for entering my contest. Never stop writeing. Your in the finalists for sure
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This just made me want to have sex. Not cool haha. Good luck
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I was reminded of the game,
After mind-blowing, toe-curling,
Oh-my-god-I’d-sell-my-soul-to-the-devil-to-do-that-again,
Sex.
this was a very creative write here i must say this was something new for my eyes -
this was a live read this was my favorite..Oh-my-god-I’d-sell-my-soul-to-the-devil-to-do-that-again,
Sex.
She served my words on a cold platter of revenge
Lixiviating with achingly-sweet poison
She let them fall from her fatally full lips, ..this was a blast write -
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glad you liked it...I enjoyed writing it and serving the cold plate of revenge...
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Desserts? That's good. Sounds like a tasty pudding to me. Yum yum.
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