How would it feel to slit my wrists?
Would the pain inside just go away
Would the horror of the day just fade away?
I can’t help but to think the thoughts that I have
As the blood drips to the floor
Would the pain just go away?
Or would it stay
Would I just be free
no feelings left inside of me
Help me I am dying to know
Is there a way out of this do you know?
Please help me I don’t want to feel this way no more
Just let my life go on with a bang
I don’t want to pretend to be happy when all I can feel is pain
As the blood drips to the floor
Would the pain just go away?
Or would it stay
Would I just be free
no feelings left inside of me
Pain is my life and it’s how I am
I don’t know how much longer I can hang on
I need to be free of this hell I am in
Let me be free as only I can
A contest entry
- Deep Dark Thoughts by Abstract Image.
330 points, ended August 11, 2007, 57 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - For Poets with 10 Or less Trophys- Pre-Writes- 10 Entry Limit. by Mercury Rising.
550 points, ended September 30, 2007, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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A really intense and painful poem that was actually very sad to read. Best of luck in my contest, and thanks for entering this excellent poem.
David
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i loved reading this poem it flowed and had a nice use of words...good luck
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