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Tragic Rabbit

The world here is scary
I fall and I fall
Eventually I end up in a great hall
I look all around
There's that Rabbit I found!
There he goes on the bound!
I'm much too big
He'll notice if I break a twig
There's a bottle

Oh how thoughtful!
I take a huge sip
Smaller I've become for my trip
I found him! he's near a huge tree!
As he tries to escape me
I'm caught by a Mad Hatter
Who wants to chatter
Over some magical tea
"I can't stay!" I say
And Run far away
For that Rabbit that curiously
Makes me want to be
A Garden of roses is in front of me
That Rabbit is talking to a queen
Oh my! She's being so mean
He's saying " Sorry I'm late"
She says "Huge Mistake"
"Cut off his Head" she screams
I call out " NO"
For that poor little rabbit
The one with the cute spring
She says" Guards Get her"
And in that matter
She tells the guards Faster
"Bring her head to me,don't set the rabbit free"
The Poor Tragic Rabbit
With such a magical habit
That seems to illuminate me
Seems he's so melancholy

I run away

I've had enough of a stay

I just hope he'll be ok

And that this is just a bad dream

For the rabbit, I don't want to scream 

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  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    December 1, 2007

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    This is just as precious as can be I love alice in wonderland the rabbit is my favorite thank you for sharing this with me best wishes


  • sanity
    June 30, 2007

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    LOL

    made me snigger... thank you such a lovely take on such a classic.... I am so glad I had the inspiration to do this contest so many lovely writes coming out of it... one or two little slips with the rhyme but it doesn't matter because it just seemed to roll off the tongue...Thank you for your entry.... hugs and love Linda xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx


    • Beverlynohime
      June 30, 2007
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      hehe Thanks! XD that was the first thing I thought of when I saw the name....XD idk y. but i did.