Innocence is not what lurks in those eyes,
Innocence worn like a mask of man made perfection,
The flux of light in the eye shimmer malice,
She shines tender with the will of a predator
Wrapped in a deceivingly pretty package
Fit with child like wonder,
Lies the determination of a blood hungry, lust happy killer
Author notes
this poem was for a vampire contest...you were supposed to write about one of the pictures...this is the picture I chose to write about..thanks for the contest..
http://tn3-1.deviantart.com/fs9/300W/i/2006/070/d/7/Innocent_vampire_by_Panicalex.jpg
A contest entry
- Quickie Contest Runners Up and Rejects~Pay it Forward~ by Angel With No Halo.
450 points, ended July 4, 2007, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Make Me Love You [show me your best] by thelovesongwriter.
800 points, ended July 29, 2007, 73 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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this is well written. Your verbage is incredible and the imagery portrayed is exceptional. Sweet and dark at the same time. You have done a fine job with this..
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I love this.. gothic and sweet at the same time.. gave me chills.. in a good way. I loved how you wove your words together so well. Such great imagery and just a great poem. Thank you for the loveliness sweety. Good luck in my contest!!
~Krys~
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