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Dogs

Dogs may bite
Dogs may scratch
but you have to love them anyway

Dogs need love
Dogs need love
Dogs need you when there sick

I love dogs
Dogs need help
when they are down

Dogs are awsome

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  • Auburn Sunrise gold member
    July 1, 2007
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    hmm...

    What was this inspired by? I'm not sure how this fits the contest... so please enlighten me.
    One error: you said "dogs need help when there down"... in this case, "there" should be "they're" because it is meant as the contraction of they are.
    Thanks for the entry.


  • Baby Cakes 93
    June 29, 2007
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    kewl

    this is my fav poem that I wrote