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Can You ?

Dreams forgotten and worn,
hearts broken and torn
tears shed where none see,
apparent this my reality.
Can you save me, can you please?

Flightless is my soul,
chaos has taken control.
Tormented is my mind,
lost in the dark,blind.
Can you light the way, can you please?

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  • My Darkness
    July 3, 2007

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    sometimes you have to just find your own way out.. but keep clawing at the surface, one day you are bound to prevail.. great write and good luck