A funky sound
[can you see their colors too?]
Of blips and bangs
[bursting pinks, greens, and blue]
Knife like tongue
with the sharpest wit.
manners do they Ill befit.
Quicksilver tongue
words gone in a flash.
Hair cuts on stage
are still not that fab.
Punk though they seem,
their rhymes are more rap.
but still i can see they've got
a welcome mat.
Mindless you Listen
Self procreation
Indulgence of your Devil's side.
Author notes
well Recently Mindless Self Indulgence Has me inspired to there.
KJA
option 8
A contest entry
- Inspired by Other Arts by Auburn Sunrise.
1000 points, ended July 15, 2007, 7 entries
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read the rules, i need your option number and something else. i dont really understand the poem ... can you please explain it? you have some nice imagry here, good wording. thanks for entering and good luck
Kelcey -
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gah wrong poem sorry *goes to correct that*
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oh... sorry i wrote it down but i got caught up in my own contest. really sorry *goes to fix it* and I idn't read anything about posting the number i don't think, but the font was so bright i might have missed it....
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very interesting
I like some of the imagery and word choices you have. Especially "quicksilver tongue". The last stanza was pretty awesome too! I really enjoyed this write, because of the subject matter and the unique way it was written. Well penned!
Thank you for the entry!
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