Listen now,
to the whispers of the wind,
Hidden somehow in a shadow,
Like a nymph
laughing
with mischief on her mind,
Singing her song,
A romance
subtle in that breeze,
A wink....
there she goes,
The trap is set,
Who will it find ?
Another lost soul
heartbroken,
But in that horizon
she'll begin anew,
Listen...
along that soft brook
the wind tells a story
of that sweet
nymph
looking for love,
sweet love,
Who will it find ?
Jan. 10, 2002
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Written January 12th, 2002
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Awesome...
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B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L. I loved it.
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Great, you gave me such a cute little picture in my mind! I love this poem. best wishes always
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amazing and beautiful....what a great poem...
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This is beautiful, it really is. So amazing...
This is what poetry really is. -
Soft and Romantic
I hope it find's me but I've been listening for a long time without hearing my name. Still the poem more than makes up for the lack of action. If I could read beauty like this everyday, I'd live as a reader and never bother to write anything. Excellent piece of work. -
Wicked! Love it!
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i thorouly enjoyed this piece of work...
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i agree with unknown user, by the way great job.
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Thank you Mystysaint !
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This is ... beautiful. The visual on it reminds me of a feather drifting on the wind, which follows your theme well. Very creative :)
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Thank you silentwhisper !
Glad you enjoyed the read ! -
Very beautiful.
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Ok ?
I think I get what you mean ?
Or am I missing something ! -
bluh bluh....i will....bluh bluh
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