You kept me in your heart
taught me of your love
showed me of you life
and I learned your ways
You are my always
I'd give you the world
no words can describe
exactly how special you are like
your beauty surpasses
the stars in the sky
I'm glad I have you, I'm glad you are mine
I'm silent, I'm voiceless
what more can I say
I know these are only only words
but the page is no longer blank
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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this is really good! i loved it!
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Outstanding
You explore your feelings very well in this poem and create a poem full of love and caring. I especially liked the lines:
I'm silent, I'm voiceless
what more can I say
Love can feel like this sometimes, impossible to put into words and I thought you explored this theme very well. Thank you for sharing this with us.
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...My oh My... Wonderfully SWEET ! ! !
Now believe me, if y girlfriend wrote me something like this.... I .... I.... in short she'd have captured my heart, attention, affection, loyalty....just name it ....FOREVER. I'd shower her with more love she only would have dreamt of. Thanks for a wonderfully sweet piece. Mwah
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