In temptation I dig my shameless soulhood as I dig my rough tomb
I hollowed out my cruel past and found, since I was buried in a womb,
Purer than who I can be,
Filth filled tads of me,
Gathering my choked screams on a quire, it bleeped an echo so wide
By my soul obsession blowing from a vast emptiness that I Long cried
Deeper than what I can see,
An eon edged by a sin anomaly,
Then the bluish bitter hands of death reached me out as if I was its first
And pulled me into its blood sucking freaks of its world-wide homicide curse
Priests your words are a lie set me free,
Way from your roots you fail me again off the apple tree,
The psychic death you know nothing of its fee,
Learn these words and rectify ones of thee,
Because we were never born free
A contest entry
- ♥ So What If I Sing Into My † Hairbrush † [[DP allowed!]]♥ by On Frail Wings..
480 points, ended July 14, 2007, 24 entries
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this is a very good write! not very scary but a good write nonetheless!
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I like the imagery and the emotion, a very colorful description there. Thanks for entering and good luck.
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this is excellent
I like this,I like the meaning behind it,word choice,I wrote a write called "sphycic taboo" so I was drawn in by your title,then I was drawn in by your words,very interesting...keep it up! -
deeeeeeeep. o i like.
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thks, that was sweet.
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semet semet, wfteret 3a 2atyab farrouj me7che , ma freet, wpizza, wburger, ..........lol(sorry 3echta ktir)
am stuffed, ur words r jst awsome
nice to get back after a month away and read such a peice
and i agree with serge, this poem, his poems and mine witness that we r free, and always be.
peace bro
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being free or not is a huge and bigger subject to be restricted in few words we should talk about that. anyway hay2tak kenet je3en
w eftar mbarak 
its good 2 c you 3al se7a again. 
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maybe you're right dude...but keep in mind that in fact we do have a mind...maybe knowldege will set us free...
great piece !
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sarajevo i wish i'll get by my mind, somewhere we all can be free, from choices, from heaven, from hell and all of those subjects that draw our life. i hope u'll get there too. thks.
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Great write!Very deep.
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wow! that was fast enough to be taken aback!!!!!!! thks!
thats sweet from you. and well i should advice you to read more of me
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