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my love

up on the mantelpiece!

i’m feeling comfortable enough

& the air takes shape

kiss it & roll over

anonymous phone calls

where cunt the rivers join

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  • Sonja
    June 30, 2007

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    You are only 7? very interesting poem and good chosen theme, different, interesting. Just keep writing.
    ~Sonja~


  • nichtmich silver member
    June 30, 2007

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    Cute

    This is adorable and deep. I like the idea of kissing the air. Kinda different, but very original. You keep it up sweetiepie7, I like your style.

  • sweetie-pie7
    June 29, 2007
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    RE

    ARE YOU EMO

  • sweetie-pie7
    June 29, 2007
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    RE

    in the world I WEE