If you really love me
Don't let me go
Hold on tight
I'll try to run away
Afraid that they'll consume me
All these things I feel
So if you really care for me
Ignore my plaintive pleas
If you really love me
You'll never set me free
Author notes
If you love it... lock it up in your closet with duct tape over its mouth and handcuffs on its wrists.
A contest entry
- Shorter The Better! by My Darkness.
400 points, ended July 4, 2007, 27 entries
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your lines don't seem to flow together, and the lack of punctuation makes it hard to read.. i like the content of this, but it needs work... thanks for entering
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ok gott em and on my way..
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Why?why are you so funny?i dont get it...im getting suspicious...are you human?you cant be human!!!
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I'm a tipsy elf, remember? ^_~
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Why?why are you so funny?i dont get it...im getting suspicious...are you human?you cant be human!!!
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wow..cause thats the first thing that would come to mind if i love something..lol. such a sweet/sad poem you have there.
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Lol
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