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Where Are You?




A painful song
fills my eyes with tears.
Yet, I keep smiling...
Where are you?





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Well, you wanted short... I usually do best with short poetry, as it happens. So, I sat here listening to a song (and a Japanese one at that), and this popped into my head. I hope you like it. ^_^

Silver?? Wow! My first silver! Thank you! *so happy* ^__________^V

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  • My Darkness
    July 3, 2007

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    wow, this is what i'm talking about...lol.. this is short, and yet holds so much meaning, great write! thanks for entering!


    • Goldmare
      July 4, 2007
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      Thank you so much! This is the first time I've won higher than bronze! I'm glad you like it so much!

      I guess short verse really is my thing. Thanks for holding this contest! ^_____^

      Goldmare