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Extending the Hand of Friendship

Boisterous girl around the bend,
Her terror seems to have no end.
Future fulfilling? It will depend.
To her an angel God did send,
A hand of frienship he did extend.

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  • My Darkness
    July 3, 2007

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    aww spiritual, i like that.. the rhyme is pretty good, a tad bit forced, but one of the better ones i've read.. nicely done, thanks for entering and good luck!