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Forgotten

Countless moments lost
Among the restless currents
Of Life's Great Unknown

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  • BittersweetPhantasm
    July 5, 2007
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    heh. nice and simple... but so true.
    good write


  • Deliverance
    July 4, 2007

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    Interesting form. It looks like some form of haiku but used to express philosophy.
    I think you have just invented the 'Philku'.
    Congratulations on your good write and your cool invention.


  • Old Fool
    June 30, 2007

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    Ah, very deep.. And so true...
    It's so easy for something good to get lost amongst the trivial, because life's too fast..
    Excellent thought, excellent message..
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