i dont know why they dont understand
is loving that person really so wrong
i'm sick of hiding it all inside
their eyes staring into your face
stomach does flips all at once
the world seems to fall apart in my hands
why do i have to keep living a lie
i love her and you will never know
never know how it feels to hide this feeling
they yell and beat me down
pain rushes through my veins
a fire burns in my heart
i want to let it out on you
to bring you down with my own words
with nothing but a poem
words carved on my last regret
for you to let me go
let me be free to love her forever
you say its all just so wrong
but you never fell so far in love
you say i'm wasting your breath
but i'm just here for the memories
so take your time walking away
i'll count the seconds left to go
until i run away from this cold prison
i've finaly gone numb as my wraist cries red
but the trigger will end it so much faster
you can weep at my grave
but dont waste your time while i'm alive
i'd rather die than live another day without her
so try to feel the cold hard steel
pressed against my bleeding heart
just listen to the sounds
echo from my room into nothing but a memorie
A contest entry
- Life Sucks (rounds contest) by SoftlyScreaming.
600 points, ended July 12, 2007, 17 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
xDeingxWithoutxYoux giglolo
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btw i need your sn in order for you to continue to the next round
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my sn is xDieingxWithoutxYoux for the next contest
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i thought that this was a brilliant poem, but i wanted something more.. this didnt give me the WOW! factor and it didnt get me to want to cry.. i liked it, but its missing a lot of things.. i wish there was more of a visual, like a fight between you and your lover, just something that had happened.. but its good the way it is, thats why im not taking this out of the contest
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