My head is now spinning
The mind is slowly reeling
My throat is constricting
I'm no longer breathing.
Your death destroys me
I scream:It can't be!
Tears threathen to fall
You ,darling,were my all.
The pain is suffocating
My heart is breaking
As the coffin descends
My life comes to an end.
A contest entry
- Loss by Clinging-to-Life.
450 points, ended July 26, 2007, 18 entries
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Powerful
What an amazing poem. I don't have very much to say, but this did make me feel really sad and emotional and it was just so powerful.
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the pain was very sharp and to the point in this write. I like the intensity, but i think if you would have explained more, and gave more detail, it could only enhance the beauty of this peice. thank you for entering...I appreciate it.
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