I spent so much time confessing
rather than watching tracks where crow’s landed
in furrows.
I know these wrinkles from when veils parted
and someone else put on my skin.
Author notes
Prompt - Serendipity
In a list
A contest entry
- Quickie....changing rules a bit by kaibab.
450 points, ended June 29, 2007, 6 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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..yup, missed you.
Congratulations.
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Tracking. The imagery in this is like knowing something too little too late...but it is never too late to find oneself again, depite the changing landscape. Sometimes have to evict squatters, tho....
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I am absolutely convinced a great big person tried my skin on for size. *smiles*...
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That ONE has full ownership, methinks!
I see I wasn't thinking along the right lines.
Have you ever read Tom Brown Jr.'s books? I think you would love them if you don't already know him. ("The Tracker", "Grandfather", and "Awakening Spirits")
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prompt...serendipity
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