dressed captivated -
i wait
patiently
soaked in hopefulness
& tears...
Author notes
he never came
A contest entry
- Quickie (come on, you know you're addicted) by Lady Eventide.
300 points, ended June 29, 2007, 9 entries
Silver trophy winner
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Please tell me what you think
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a sad way to look at prom..but an interesting poetry subject. almost like a mini mystery story within your poem. i think it would sound better dressed captivated instead of captivatignly
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i was a bit shifty on that part, thanks
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Oh! A broken promise! So sad indeed! Beautiful...sad.
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Awwww Beautiful
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