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kismet







in one hand she held fate
and through her veins
a slow, transcending thing called Time
flowed with pathetic sighs








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narcissus at oasis

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  • Wulfareika
    June 29, 2007

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    This is nice I can relate. A darker side to what I suppose some people practically live by (fate or destiny). Best of luck! x


  • Matt Holck
    June 29, 2007
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    sigh to relieve weariness


  • freestallion
    June 29, 2007
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    Wow, I really love this poem; the imagery is just superb. Good luck on the contest!!


  • GoddessHella
    June 29, 2007
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    very nice. i like the images you are portraying here. great job and much love

  • GoddessHella
    June 29, 2007
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    the prompt: Kismet

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