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Thank You (Hurting Me So I Would Hate You)

That’s it I have enough to trying to make this right
When it’s my hatred of you that gives me my life
So I will say my prayers before I go to sleep
And you can be sure you won’t be in my dream

Now if you look at the clock you’ll see the time has run out
You was full of confusion and I was full of doubt
But it’s all over now so go and ask god for break
For I’m not going until you’ve took all you can take

Thank you for the daily pain and nightly agony
Thank you for everything you never did for me
Thank you for hurting me so that I would hate you
Thank you for all the poor quality memories
Thank you for the little bittersweet brutalities
Thank you for hurting me so that I would hate you

You were planning a future while I was going mad
This is beyond stupid this is beyond bad
We were barely able to talk about our pasts
So almost without you knowing it was over so fast

There are hearts that are sweeter than the one you gave
Hearts that would be satisfied by the heart I made
So take you words that are worthless and leave
Because when you are here I cannot breathe

Thank you for the daily pain and nightly agony
Thank you for everything you never did for me
Thank you for hurting me so that I would hate you
Thank you for all the poor quality memories
Thank you for the little bittersweet brutalities
Thank you for hurting me so that I would hate you

You know that you will be one of my cherished lovers
But don’t be naive and think there were no others
I have lost my mind and I have lost my pity
As you didn’t have anything left to give to me

Thank you for the daily pain and nightly agony
Thank you for everything you never did for me
Thank you for hurting me so that I would hate you
Thank you for all the poor quality memories
Thank you for the little bittersweet brutalities
Thank you for hurting me so that I would hate you

Author notes

Option 1 - And this is how it feels when i ignore the words you spoke to me. And this is where i loose myself when i keep running away from you. And this is who i am when, when i dont know myself anymore. And this is what i choose when its all left up to me


Option 2

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  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    December 21, 2007

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    I can feel your confusion, anger and sadness. In a way it makes sens that Karl does the same thing, trying to make me hate him. He's doing a good job of it, though I can't stop loving him. This must be horrible to go through and as I say I can relate in a way to this, as I have been driven to near hate him.


  • Nyhte
    November 5, 2007

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    Very well done!

    Amazing, simply amazing. Thank you for entering, it was such an honour to read this work. I thank you for this little flame of inspiration with which this work has instilled in me. Like the olympic torch, but oh so much more profound. Good luck.

    -Sin AKA Dreamer Of Shadows


  • foreverxnow
    October 16, 2007

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    wow. this is totally amazing. i love it so much!!!! i hope it wins all the contests it's entered in. keep writing great stuff!


  • lesbian-in-love
    October 16, 2007

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    I like this one. Very well written. A done me wrong this is what you get poem. Thanks for entering and good luck to you in the contest.


  • Florida Sunshine
    October 10, 2007

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    This could be a "you've done me wrong" song~ by the 3 stanza you had me cry a tear.... maybe cause of your words... maybe cause i've been there... (recently) ... I understand where you're coming from.

    Very intensely write~ I can really feel your passion~

    Thanks for entering the Battle of the Sex's Contest~ Good luck to you ~ we'll be making our selections closer to the close of the contest ~


  • Naridill
    September 25, 2007

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    Seems very lyrical, almost a beat behind it. Is worded very nicely but some parts seem ut of place. I would suggest reading outloud for edit.

    Much luck

  • Acidanthra
    September 5, 2007

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    You got one emotion to to the tee. No more pity. I am to the point where I have no pity on him for anything. If his back hurts, let it hurt. He was not there for me when I was severely sick. Why should I be a slave for him? I can definitely relate to this poem. Hate is so free that it's easy to grab anywhere in the universe. Once you have it, it never goes away.

    Great Write!


  • PaintedParisPassion
    July 10, 2007
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    ok. well theres some pretty bad gramatical errors in this, and you didnt follow the rules at all, :[. please fix this, or im going to have to DQ you. i really dont want to do that hun, because this isnt a bad write at all.


  • forever and ever
    July 2, 2007
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    wow. this is a very good write! it sounds like a song. good luck in the contest and keep up the great work!


  • fallenangel671
    July 2, 2007

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    AWESOME! wicked poem from the quote i loved this, nice its like a song,
    my favorite part would have to be:

    Thank you for the daily pain and nightly agony
    Thank you for everything you never did for me
    Thank you for hurting me so that I would hate you
    Thank you for all the poor quality memories
    Thank you for the little bittersweet brutalities
    Thank you for hurting me so that I would hate you
    awesome poem,
    keep writing
    good luck in the contest


    ~Ashley~<3

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