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Amour

Stepping in an uncertain earth certainly
Smiling with the downy flakes of snow
Crying with the drops of rain
Waking with the stars
Feeling euphoria swelling inside
Love takes to the most pleasant ride.

Time slipping from palms when sitting beside love
And without him minutes and seconds don't move.
Seeing the entire world running except you
Finding in everything old something new.

When the sweetest rhapsody turns into the pearls of eyes
And the blues of someone else becomes the reason of sighs
Love has crawled inside
And life adorns herself like a bride.
 

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Option 2
Shapla

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  • Leaving Today
    June 30, 2007
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    beautiful and poetic, good poem


  • crimsondew
    June 29, 2007

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    So beautiful, I can feel the feeling of being loved in this. It is writ all over. It is well written.. Good luck!