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to me

leave me in the gutter
with the clutter
of the streets

leave me with the broken
the defiled
the diseased

leave me with your heartache
your desires
your release

leave me so i know just what
you could have done
to me

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  • ArmorXForXSleep
    June 29, 2007
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    This poem is really good i like the way the sentences come together to tell kind of a sad story I like it good luck!