The suspense stifles
Hours dragging on,
Moments akin to lifetimes
A static choice
To throw caution to the wind; to yield to desire?
To yield willpower to the moment?
Conviction falling in the face of habit?
No
Yes
Thus the dilemma of a far off consequence
Thus the unraveling psyche
Thus the pristine chaos
Ending in broken sleep
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wonderful work dear!
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Very good! Very good! Wow...precious memories oh how they linger....lol.
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Wow brilliant! You skillfully took me through temptation, the battle, wrestling, the choices, the dilema, the endings and today because I haven't had a ciggy since yesterday morning. Shhhhhh!
Peace Georgia
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Impressive... One thing that I like in this poem is the “no" and the "Yes" Those two words are just amazingly powerful by themselves and clearly marks the point. I see a lot of people try to complicate their poetry with words they do not know but this is genuine. You have a good vocabulary. I enjoyed the lenght- wonderful! Keep it up!
AtiVan
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