Scintillating tingle
upon sweltering, ivory nape:
fervent with winged promise
fulfilled in one celestial glance
Author notes
Prompt: "Your whisper was like the summer, and that summer was like heaven, and I could see it in your eyes"
In a list
A contest entry
- Quickie: 10 entries, 10 minutes, 15 words by Tangled Angle.
300 points, ended June 29, 2007, 7 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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This could just blow me away,if i had not been holding two- gallon cartons of Butter pecan and Rockey road.
Love it.
Joe
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See, that's what I like about you... a guy who is grounded by what really matters in life!
Thanks for the comment, Joe!
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This is beautiful work I just love the way this poem feels
You pen your words with a brilliant quill.
Thanks for sharing, best to you in all you do.
Tony
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Holy Mother of Pearl Jam!
What a quote to be Inspired by and what a piece
penned from the Inspiration
Love it!
and that word: sweltering
Appreciate Your visit to my work!
Congratulations on Your Trophy win
Many blessings to You!
Best wishes too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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Scintilating tingle is priceless....
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Awwww Beautiful
wow as I read this my mind just to a breather...The beauty is exhilarating...Great write sweetie
Blessings
~Cheryl~
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Not having a problem with backgrounds here, good write, nicely done, best of luck...Scott
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Excellent take on the prompt.
AP is being really slow. I am starting to get this fear that one day the site is going to crash and all my poetry is gone.
So... I am probably going to start taking some of it off. lol and printing it.
[back to your poem]
Profound metaphor that contrasts well. Good imagery too.
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Prompt: "Your whisper was like the summer, and that summer was like heaven, and I could see it in your eyes"
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